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It's that time of the year!

Mon Dec 24, 2012 11:55 am by Fuura

Yes it is.

For some it's snowy goodness, for some it's sunny festivities.
Christmas is happening just now and i sincerely hope, no expect, everyone to have a smahing time with family, relatives and …

Grand Opening on the Horizon

Thu May 24, 2012 7:32 am by Fuura

I know there have been a couple people already, who have been watching and have gotten very excited, and today, i am excited to say this:

Everything of importance is done and registrations are open. …

All done with rulemaking

Sat Mar 17, 2012 11:29 pm by Fuura

Yes, all done. With the main rules, as in the rulebook, application rules and creations rules.
The inventory and some minor topics stil need some work. But the main rule construct is all ready.

Rest …


    Devilfruit; Kosho Kosho no Mi (Pepperbeard)

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    Devilfruit; Kosho Kosho no Mi (Pepperbeard)

    Post by Pepperbeard on Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:28 am

    Kosho Kosho no Mi ("Pepper Pepper Fruit")

    Type: Paramecia
    Description: The Kosho Kosho no Mi, AKA Pepper Pepper Fruit is a Devilfruit that bestows on its user the ability to sprout peppers and other spices and herbs from one's hair, or if there is a lack of hair, their hair follicles themselves, both naturally and at will. To sprout them at will requires a bit of concentration, however, and an audible grunt can often be heard. These peppers can vary in types and varieties, from the Sweet Bell Pepper to the Bhut Jolokia and anything in between, and spices and herbs can range from Oregano to Dill and other things.
    The fruit itself resembles a Red Savina Habanero, except it has a black swirly pattern coiling around it, and it is about the size of a grapefruit.


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    Re: Devilfruit; Kosho Kosho no Mi (Pepperbeard)

    Post by Fuura on Mon Jul 02, 2012 5:04 pm

    Concern 1: Why only for beards? - Fruits usually bestow an ability that's for the individual to use as they see fit and they don't usually require things like that - abilities are tailored towards being technically possible for everyone.

    Concern 2: Half of the description is not about facts, but opinion. If something is wonderful or useless depends on the individual - parts like "Mind you, other than the peppers and spices, the ability is almost entirely useless." don't generally belong into an objective description. Write it so that it would be a viable, objective description, technically applicable to other people too (e.G. in case the character ever gets dropped and the fruit is free again).
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    Re: Devilfruit; Kosho Kosho no Mi (Pepperbeard)

    Post by Pepperbeard on Mon Jul 02, 2012 5:59 pm

    Fixed~
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    Re: Devilfruit; Kosho Kosho no Mi (Pepperbeard)

    Post by Fuura on Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:12 pm

    Removed another sentence of unnecessarity, seems good now. Approved.
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    Re: Devilfruit; Kosho Kosho no Mi (Pepperbeard)

    Post by Izzy on Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:44 pm

    Fuura hit on the big points, and I can't find anything else to pick at. Approved.

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